NATMOS:R _A| ( A reflection and Future of ) LQ’s account of the end

~louq

LQ
 The writer stops what he is doing and remains silent while contemplating on what he is doing.
He acknowledges how the disease damages the mind, slowly and painfully. 
Yet, he doesn't want to bring them to suffer because of their condition. 
He wants to bring them to the end in a peacefull matter.
He’s not sure on what to do.
With the previous year beginning to close, he returns to the Midnight pub to see if anyone wants to see more of the story.

~bartender, give the other drink of orange juice. That could cheer me up.

I am a bit conflicted if i should continue on.

In one way, i’m basically adding a story line to an audio experience, but also fictionally giving a terminal disease. A disease that breaks your brain.

I had multiple ideas on how to do it. But, im not sure on how to incoperate it properly

I dont want to put too much pressure on the characters and make them suffer. I am not a monster by doing that.

However I dont want to downplay the disease, or even worse make the disease a joke. I am not the trolls.

I also want to be accurate to the disease diagnosis. Yet, C1, does not reach my expectations.

I might continue on with a story, because I am bored and i need something to do other than school work or homework.

Yet, I expect some opposition of my work, but I promise that in the end they, and you will be rewarded.

So, looking back, what do you think about it.

Is it good, is it horrible, tell me. Im all ears!

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~orna_de_brume wrote:

The answer you are looking for is in what would be the best for the plot of your story. But also follow your heart.