Midnight Pub

A Simple Fall Haiku

~theoddballphilosopher

Two Brown Maple Seeds,

Floating down in Autumn Breeze,

Spinning endlessly.

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~ropocl wrote:

Nice. I love a good haiku. I have been trying to use them as a mindfulness practice more often myself, when I find the impulse to capture a moment on camera, or if I need to slow down, I take the time to assemble a haiku about the moment. Sometimes I write them down but often it's enough to just honor and appreciate the moment and move on in a better state of mind. Thanks for sharing!

~peony3 wrote:

I like it when the last line is just two words. Nicely done!